Thank for sharing your poem, it put a smile on my face :)
:)
Not bad i like it.
The eternal English student within me wants to try and break it down, but i like the simple message
i have to admit i wrote it in like ten minutes because i was Inspired and didn't think too much about the symbolism, but i think it gets the message across and i'm really glad you like it! the message was something i've been trying to put into words for a while but found it really difficult to do before i made a poem out of it. it's funny how some ideas are naturally suited to expression through poetry
Thank for sharing your poem, it put a smile on my face :)
:)
Not bad i like it.
The eternal English student within me wants to try and break it down, but i like the simple message
i have to admit i wrote it in like ten minutes because i was Inspired and didn't think too much about the symbolism, but i think it gets the message across and i'm really glad you like it! the message was something i've been trying to put into words for a while but found it really difficult to do before i made a poem out of it. it's funny how some ideas are naturally suited to expression through poetry