The title looks like it's trying to imply that the thiefs specifically targeted her, when the article makes it more clear that they likely just tried to steal the car not knowing it was from the Secret Service.
Gotta add that clickbait for the views 🙄
Sad thing is, it probably would have generated as many hits if the headline was more open. I mean that’s freaking hilarious in a morbid way - that the would be thieves just happened to pick the wrong car to try and steal.
The new and improved bait car with active defenses!
How would you have written it?
Not OP
Secret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people pick the wrong SUV to streal.
Secret Service Fires Shots at Car Thieves
But we don't do non sensationalist headlines anymore.
You just made me realize that the original headline doesn't specify that the SUV is where the granddaughter is. You also make that mistake.
I think we can do better. Let's see:
Secret Service open fire at thieves who unknowingly attempted to break into SUV carrying Biden's granddaughter.
And I still think we can do better, but right now I'm le tired.
The vehicle was empty, it wasn't carrying anyone.
Ah, serves me right for not reading TFA.
In that case I would have simply written what @Maggoty@lemmy.world wrote in this very thread.
The title looks like it's trying to imply that the thiefs specifically targeted her, when the article makes it more clear that they likely just tried to steal the car not knowing it was from the Secret Service.
Gotta add that clickbait for the views 🙄
Sad thing is, it probably would have generated as many hits if the headline was more open. I mean that’s freaking hilarious in a morbid way - that the would be thieves just happened to pick the wrong car to try and steal.
The new and improved bait car with active defenses!
How would you have written it?
Not OP
Secret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people pick the wrong SUV to streal.
Secret Service Fires Shots at Car Thieves
But we don't do non sensationalist headlines anymore.
You just made me realize that the original headline doesn't specify that the SUV is where the granddaughter is. You also make that mistake.
I think we can do better. Let's see:
Secret Service open fire at thieves who unknowingly attempted to break into SUV carrying Biden's granddaughter.
And I still think we can do better, but right now I'm le tired.
The vehicle was empty, it wasn't carrying anyone.
Ah, serves me right for not reading TFA.
In that case I would have simply written what @Maggoty@lemmy.world wrote in this very thread.
That implies that there was a right SUV to steal.